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\begin{document}
\firstpage{1}
\title[short Title]{Jflow: A JavaScript based workflow management system}
\title[short Title]{Jflow: a workflow management system for web applications}
\author[Mariette \textit{et~al}]{J\'{e}r\^{o}me Mariette\,$^{1,*}$,
Fr\'{e}d\'{e}ric Escudi\'{e}\,$^{1}$, Philippe Bardou\,$^2$, Ibouniyamine
Nabihoudine\,$^1$, C\'{e}line Noirot\,$^1$, Marie-St\'{e}phane Trotard\,$^1$,
......@@ -29,8 +29,7 @@ tools requires to mask the complexity induced by the needed High Performance
Computing (HPC) environment. The connexion between interface and computing
infrastructure is usually specific to each portal. With Jflow, we introduce
a Workflow Management System (WMS), composed of jQuery plug-ins which can easily
be
embedded in any web application and a Python library providing all requested
be embedded in any web application and a Python library providing all requested
features to setup, run and monitor workflows.
\section{Availability:}
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......@@ -69,10 +69,10 @@ space, especially since it only seems to wrap Makeflow and weaver. While the
english is acceptable, the article contains some grammatical errors and should
be checked for correct english.}
The ``Methode'' section has been fully rewritten to fucus on the Jquery
plugins and their benefits. An integration example is also described in a new
section named ``Example''. The article has been checked by a native engish
speaker.
The ``Method'' section has been fully rewritten to focus on the Jquery
plugins and their benefits. An integration example description is also provided
in a new section named ``Example''. The article has also been checked by a
native engish speaker.
\textbf{Minor: \newline why is WEB written uppercase?}
......@@ -92,9 +92,9 @@ describes the key operations, but in between those two needs to be a clear
statement of what makes JFlow itself unique.}
The introduction has been rewritten, to first introduce the benefits of WMS,
then to describe existing WMS and finally introduce jflow and its originality.
A section ``Example'' as also been added to explain and focus on jflow main
features which are its five jQuery plugins.
then to describe existing WMS and finally to introduce jflow and its
originality. An ``Example'' section as also been added to explain and focus on
jflow main features which are its five jQuery plugins.
\textbf{Also, it would help to provide a brief sketch of the scale (\# jobs, \#
machines, amount of time) at which JFlow has been used.}
......@@ -123,7 +123,8 @@ appearance, not importance.}
seem to fit Jflow, as, in my opinion, it is a python based WMS with a JavaScript
interface.}
La je pense qu'il faut changer de titre non ?!
Title has been changed for ``Jflow: a workflow management system for web
applications''.
\textbf{2. The justification for the article hinges on the fact that using WMS
such as Galaxy does not enable an easy integration with already existing
......@@ -146,7 +147,7 @@ think this is even more relevant than the Jflow API section. Perhaps you might
want to reduce that section and include some text on the embedding of WMS
features more explicitly —I leave this to the authors’s discretion.}
The ``Methode'' section has been fully rewritten to fucus on the Jquery
The ``Method'' section has been fully rewritten to focus on the Jquery
plugins and their benefits. An integration example is also given in a new
section named ``Example''.
......@@ -157,7 +158,7 @@ substantiated further. It would help if it was further contextualised giving
specific examples and/or references. to me this need is not so clear and/or
common.}
This sentence has been deleted from the introduction in order to focus more on
This sentence has been removed from the introduction in order to focus more on
generic web applications.
\textbf{5. General comment, the style of the article would help with a bit more
......@@ -167,8 +168,8 @@ applications.” Why is this a paragraph? It seems that it does not follow nor
precedes any idea; it does not seem to flow. It seems like this paragraph lies
in isolation, reducing the readability of the article.}
The article was taken up in its entirety and in order to add cohesion between
the different paragraphs the text has been checked by a native engish speaker.
The article was reorganized in order to add cohesion between the different
paragraphs. The text has also been checked by a native engish speaker.
\textbf{6. I find figure 1 does not add too much to the article. It would make
sense in a software-oriented type of journal but I think that for
......@@ -179,8 +180,7 @@ RNAbrowse. An example like that where I can see Jflow working would make this
article a lot more attractive and compelling.}
A full section describing jflow integration within NG6 has been added to the
text. The previous figure has been substituted by a figure illustrating this
example.
text. The figure represents now this example.
\textbf{7. I tried to look further into the documentation, which is extensive
(e.g., Quick start) and went to Example1. Example1 is a template, not a running
......@@ -189,10 +189,10 @@ install it. I have tried to install it in my laptop and failed miserably
downloading and installing Makeflow. Perhaps it might be good to have an
installation package that could already include the required dependencies?}
Example1 is not a template but a running example of jflow. To avoid the
confusion, the page describtion has been changed to ``This is a running example
for a simple workflow manager website. Use it as a starting point to create
something more unique.''.
Example1 is not a template but a running example of jflow. To avoid confusion,
the page description has been changed to ``This is a running example for a
simple workflow manager website. Use it as a starting point to create something
more unique.''.
\textbf{Minor points\newline========\newline}
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